Sue Min Hwang/Essay Proposal/Wed 3,4

My essay topic will be about the importance of maintaining a rough harmony of fulfilling military, socio-economic needs, and sustained growth while giving more weight on supporting sustained growth. I will introduce the topic by mentioning a short history of the world's tendency on attaching importance of a sole factor. In the body paragraph, I will talk about the significance of sustained growth, and in the second body I will mention about keeping a rough harmony will be able to satisfy the citizens in the current society. In the concluding paragraph, I will summarize each of my main points and restate my opinion. 

Yong-yoon Cho/Essay Proposal/Wednesday 11:00~12:50

My essay topic will be 'female characters in movies'. The aim of this essay is to emphasize the importance of diverse female characters. I will introduce the topic by mentioning the sex ratio of characters in movies. In body paragraph, I will explain three supporting points. First supporting point is that female characters make movies interesting. I'll give some examples. Next supporting point is a huge impact of movies on reality. I'm planning to underline that stereotyped images of women and girls can have a bad influence on children. Lastly, why are there few female characters even when almost half of the population are women and girls? Women purchase half of the movie tickets sold in US. (In Korea, women purchase more tickets than men.) In concluding paragraph, I will summarize three main points and write my own thoughts about neccessity of female characters. 

MunJinGon/Essay proposal/Wednesday 11:00~12:50

Topic: Reasons for playing computer games

 

Thesis statement :  Many people play computer games for various reasons: excitement, social relationship or money

 

Body paragragh 1

Topic sentence: First, many people enjoy computer games for fun.

 

Supporting points:

1. it can release stress. 

2. it makes time go fast.

 

Body paragragh 2

Topic sentence: Another reason for playing computer games is to make new relationship.

 

Supporting points

1. Especailly for korean guys, it  is one way to make people more familiar.

2. We can make new friends in on-line games.

 

Body paragragh 3

Topic sentence: Finally, for some people, earning money can be a sufficient reason to play computer games.

 

Supporting points

1. Internet broadcasting program

2. contest

Shin SUngju / Proposal / Wed 3 4

 

 

My essay topic is "Artificial Intelligence will be threat or not"
In the introductory paragraph, I will write about background information of artificial intelligence as the hook. Then, I will give my opinion - artificial intelligence could be threat, and three thesis
In the body paragraph, I will write more specifically. Body one will be about the rapid development of mordern technology. Body two will be about examples of the artificial intelligence technology. Body three will be assumen the consequences if AI out of control.
In the concluding paragraph, I will restate my opinion and I will also write my own idea.

Yunsang Eom/essay proposal/wed34

My esseay topic is 'midnight snack syndrome' This means that eating food during night has many health problem. In introductory paragraph I will treate midnight snack syndrome`s mean and trend of eating many food during night.
Next, In body paragraphs As background, I will explain reasons of midnight snack syndrome dividing as part of the circumstances and habits. And I`m going to start main sentence that midnight snack threaten our health using 3 reason.
Finally as concluding paragraph, I will present summary of the main topic and write restatement of the thesis for emphasizing main topic

Chae Won Kim/essay proposal/Wed34

I am going to submit a suggestion that can arouse political attention of university students.

 

Its topic will be 'Political Participation of University Students', and my controlling idea is 'University students have to cast a vote all the elections'.

 

The coming Great Election in Korea inspired me-though it will be finished during next two commas of our class, elections will be held forever.

 

I think that casting a vote is not only a right, but also a duty for citizens in nations of representational democracy.

 

But in my experience, some university students who have to ask participations in general have no interest in such things.

 

Therefore, I want to convince them with my essay. 

Yeji Oh/Essay Proposal/ Wednesday34

The topic of my essay will be about  the reasons why we teenagers' cosmetic surgery should be banned. I would divided into three main points. I want to separate into physical, psychological, and the economic reasons. For the first physical reason, I would like to say that students body and face and even bones are not grown perfectly, and it will make problems when they already did cosmetic surgery but their bodies and faces are grown after the surgery. Also, in psychological reason, surgery is a kind of a vogue that can change easily and though they really want it and they change their face, after the fashion gone and new fashion comes, mostly they can't do anything but regret their past choices. also, it's because they can be addicted. Usually the main reason why they are addicted is that because they can't satisfied with themselves, and because teenagers' are still young and their mind is not yet grown entirely, they don't satisfy with themselves and after they do cosmetic surgery, they would keep doing that to cover their shortcomings. Finally, it's because too costly, it took a lot of money for teenagers like the costs of the uniforms, foods, books and even academy. And mostly the money comes from their parents not by themselves. But it cost too much though it is not that much important or valuable. It's just a luxury thing like accessories not a must-do things. So if it is not needed like plastic surgery, students should not do cosmetic surgery. In concluding sentence, I will summarize my main points of the essay and suggest other ways instead of the surgery and tell again that students should not do cosmetic surgery.