Hi. My name is Mun Jin Gon. It means 'treasure of earth'.
I was born in 1997, so I'm 20 years old.
I came from Busan. Now I live in dormitory
My family are seven members. Grandma, mother, father, uncle, two sisiter and me.
My hobby is playing basketball and watching basketball games.
I can forget about bad things while I do this.
So I join the basketball club named 'Mudaepo'
Actually I'm not good at playing basketball.
Therefore, I will practice once a week in this club.
My favorite basketball team is San Antonio Spurs in NBA, but my favorite basketball player is Damian Lillard in Portland Trail Blazers.
Maybe it is very hard for me to understand lecture and write something in English because I'm not good at English.
But I will do my best to improve my writing skills and English ability in this class.
I liked how you started introduction with basic information like meaning of your name and family members. If i could suggest something in the back, how about being a little more elaborate? What are your plans to improve your english? And mabey put an awesome title to your essay.
ReplyDeleteOverall I liked your introduction and I hope we have a great semaster together! Have a good day
I liked how you started introduction with basic information like meaning of your name and family members. If i could suggest something in the back, how about being a little more elaborate? What are your plans to improve your english? And mabey put an awesome title to your essay.
ReplyDeleteOverall I liked your introduction and I hope we have a great semaster together! Have a good day
YejiOh : You have such a big family! It's good that I ca have some information which you wanted to tell us. It's good choice that you joined the club which is related to sports you like.
ReplyDeleteI also like playing basketball and watching it. My favorite team is Clippers.
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