There are a lot of reasons for students to join university clubs and organizations. First, students become club or organization members to develop thier capabilities of what they are already good at. A student who are good at basketball joins a basketball sports club. Second, students join clubs or organizations to experience new things even though he or she is not good at his or her interested things. A student who does not play the guitar well joins a club band in order to learn how to play it. Last of all, even though they are into something or do something well, they can be unsure of being a member of clubs or organizations. Then Friends or chance to make friends can bring them to join clubs or organizations. Students enroll in clubs or organizations for such reasons like drive to develop thier specialty or learn new thing and anticipation to broaden or stengthen human relationships. 양승혁
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