Eunsol Lee/Essay proposal/Wed 3-4

In my essay, I will deal with the matter, not strengths but weaknesses, of globalization. So my topic would be 'drawbacks of globalization' and title would be "Underbelly of Globalization". By stating short compliment in the introduction, would make slight turnover. Mainly, my three supporting points would be Inequality with Competition, Standardization of culture, and Brittleness by Complexity. It seems like this writing only covers social and cultural aspects, but some economic or political things would be included, slightly. As concluding, I would restate thesis and summarize body part, then will motivate readers to consider about their globalized future, a final thought.   

Yeoroom Lee/Essay Proposal/Wed 3, 4

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My essay topic will be 'the benefits of doing exercise.'

In introductory paragraph, building sentence will have examples or trend about lack
of exercise in both man and women, and simple reason to it. And thesis statement will
be about the fundemental benefits of doing exercise, like 'though hard working and
patience needed, exercise would bring the three major benefits.'

And body paragraph, as given by thesis statement, would address the benefits by
details. Paragraph 1 will be about physical improvement, based on my personal
experience. Parapraph 2 will be about mental improvement, using old maxims related
with this. And last paragraph will be about social benefit, explaining in 3 points.

I'll have concluding paraprah show the overall benefits doing exercise and emphasis
the thesis statement in another words.  

Dongwon Kang/Essay proposal/Wed 3-4

I chose 'Smartphone Addiction' as a topic for my essay to warn people who spend a lot of time using smartphones of the problems and dangers that can arise from smartphone overuse. In the introductory paragraph, I will start with a question: 'Are you suffering from Nomophobia(no-mobile-phone-phobia)?' and then I will categorize the main problems of smartphone addiction into 3 types addressing each of them in the body paragraph. The first problem is that smartphone addiction can damage our health badly. Spending long time on smartphones can decrease our visual acuity and also cause insomnia. Next, excessive smartphone use can lead to unexpected budget cuts. People who are addicted to smartphone games impulsively charge large amount of money to get game items. Lastly, people who are addicted to smartphones have difficulty in making relationship with others in reality. People obsessed with smartphones tend to avoid having interaction with someone in reality because they may concentrate more on their SNS-based relationship. In the concluding paragraph, I will summarize the main points of the essay and suggest the readers to reduce the time spent on smartphones and pay more attention to the reality.

EunYoung Kim / Essay Proposal / Wednesday 3 4

The topic of my essay will be about the importance of traveling. I plan on introducing three major reasons as body paragraphs, with some supporting points including my own personal experience related to the topic sentences. To give a brief overview, the first reason is that traveling allows you to broaden your perspective in life. Understanding each and every culture can help break stereotypes you may have had before visiting the country. Another reason is that you can become friends with various types of people while traveling. Lastly, traveling can be therapeutic. A lot of people visit other places to relieve stress and simply relax. I will wrap up my essay in the concluding paragraph by summarizing these three main points.

Minyoung Jang/essay proposal/wed 3.4

My essay topic is "why self-interior trend spreads recently". In the introductory paragraph, I will write what self-interior means and recently trend of self-interior. Also In the body paragraphs, I'll write three reasons why self-interior trend spreads recently. First reason is for saving money. Self-interior is much cheeper than requesting professional interior company. Another reason is single-person household growth. As single household increases, people prefer their own space that fits with oneself's method of livelihood. Final reason is effect of media. Now a days, TV programs about self-interior occur gradually, and blog about that is trend. So because people are influenced by media, self-interior became trend among the young. In the concluding paragraph, I will summarize and restate three reasons.

 

Minsung Kim/essay proposal/wed 3,4

Minsung Kim

 

I will going to write about ways of reducing stress. My thesis statement would have topic, reducing stress and writer's opinion, it has three ways. I will introduce three ways that would help readers to handle stress. First reason is to exercise. By exercising people could forget stress while focusing on exercising. Also, enough sleep could help reduce stress because a good-night's sleep can make your condition better. So that could lead to decrease of stress. Last reason is to talk to himself or herself. Talking to oneself could make the person reduce the anxiety and keep oneself calm. In addition, while talking themselves trying to see everything on the bright side help them to be more positive on everything.

Shin Sungjoo / First Draft / Wed. 3 4

Shin Sungjoo / First Draft / Wed. 3 4

 

Why should university student living in the dormitory?

When student start university, they have to make a choice: Where to live? While many students are able to continue living at home, and some renting privately, a large number of students choose to live in dormitory. In fact, living in a dormitory advantages students from several ways. Make friends, learn social skills and save money.

First of all, living in the dormitory can make lots of friends. As a matter of fact, It is easier to make friends when everyone lives in dormitory. Generally, dormitory could contain thousands people and it is easy to find someone who had similar hobbies. In addition, dormitory usually has lounge that provides sofas, TV and cooking area. It is a good place to meet new people and making friends while they having conversations.  Some dormitory comprise of international students, which could be bonus if they want to make friend from all over the world, and this is one of the advantages why students living in the dormitory.

Another advantage for living in dormitory is that student can learn the social skills during the dormitory life. Getting into a university could be the first step to join the society for most of students. Normally, each student has one or two roommates in one dormitory room. They have to learn how to share everything with other people. And they have to learn how to do household chores. Moreover, dormitory could seem as a small society, wide variety of people is in there, student should learn skills about how to take care of relationship with them.

At last, students also can save money by living in dormitory. For those students who choose to live rent house, they have to pay the cash deposit which is nearly unpayable money for them. However, dormitory liver does not need to pay it. Another benefit for dormitory liver is that all the electric charge and water rate are free. Additionally, dormitory almost located close to the campus. Thus, students can save public transportation fees as well.

In conclusion, students may have different choice to accommodation selections, but, living in dormitory not only can make many friends, but also can learn social skills. Meanwhile, they can save money as well. All in all, living in the dormitory could be the best option.