201502459 이열음 Yeoroom Lee
My essay topic will be 'the benefits of doing exercise.'
In introductory paragraph, building sentence will have examples or trend about lack
of exercise in both man and women, and simple reason to it. And thesis statement will
be about the fundemental benefits of doing exercise, like 'though hard working and
patience needed, exercise would bring the three major benefits.'
And body paragraph, as given by thesis statement, would address the benefits by
details. Paragraph 1 will be about physical improvement, based on my personal
experience. Parapraph 2 will be about mental improvement, using old maxims related
with this. And last paragraph will be about social benefit, explaining in 3 points.
I'll have concluding paraprah show the overall benefits doing exercise and emphasis
the thesis statement in another words.
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