Topic: Reasons for playing computer games
Thesis statement : Many people play computer games for various reasons: excitement, social relationship or money
Body paragragh 1
Topic sentence: First, many people enjoy computer games for fun.
Supporting points:
1. it can release stress.
2. it makes time go fast.
Body paragragh 2
Topic sentence: Another reason for playing computer games is to make new relationship.
Supporting points
1. Especailly for korean guys, it is one way to make people more familiar.
2. We can make new friends in on-line games.
Body paragragh 3
Topic sentence: Finally, for some people, earning money can be a sufficient reason to play computer games.
Supporting points
1. Internet broadcasting program
2. contest
I want to change the topic. Not playing 'computer' games, just playing games
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