Yeji Oh/Essay Proposal/ Wednesday34

The topic of my essay will be about  the reasons why we teenagers' cosmetic surgery should be banned. I would divided into three main points. I want to separate into physical, psychological, and the economic reasons. For the first physical reason, I would like to say that students body and face and even bones are not grown perfectly, and it will make problems when they already did cosmetic surgery but their bodies and faces are grown after the surgery. Also, in psychological reason, surgery is a kind of a vogue that can change easily and though they really want it and they change their face, after the fashion gone and new fashion comes, mostly they can't do anything but regret their past choices. also, it's because they can be addicted. Usually the main reason why they are addicted is that because they can't satisfied with themselves, and because teenagers' are still young and their mind is not yet grown entirely, they don't satisfy with themselves and after they do cosmetic surgery, they would keep doing that to cover their shortcomings. Finally, it's because too costly, it took a lot of money for teenagers like the costs of the uniforms, foods, books and even academy. And mostly the money comes from their parents not by themselves. But it cost too much though it is not that much important or valuable. It's just a luxury thing like accessories not a must-do things. So if it is not needed like plastic surgery, students should not do cosmetic surgery. In concluding sentence, I will summarize my main points of the essay and suggest other ways instead of the surgery and tell again that students should not do cosmetic surgery.