A couple of years ago there was a telecom ad in which a baby is crying during a train travel while their parents embarrassed knowing not what to do. Suddenly a gentle man show an animation, pororo as proud as peacock then the baby quit cry8ing and watch it pleasedly. Watching animations is fun and for parents, showing animations is convenient. Some may argue showing animation to children decrease valuable playing time between parents and children and watching animations is time wasting activity for not only babies but also young adults. However, watching animations is good because it is fun, educational and intellectual.
Above all, animations provide with fun. They have refined proceedings, distinct characters and amazing twists. they are no less impressive than written literatures. Appreciaters can have fun from not only their stories and characters but also their drawings. From wide view, they take use of various arts of drawings. There are own impressions and strength depending on drawing types of animations such as computer graphy, silhouette, clay and hand drawing. From narrow view point, animations generate pleasure by thier fantastic scences such as fighting scenes, beautiful scenes and others that is hard to produce in real filming. Animation fans can enjoy animations in other fields dealing with them like games, movie versions, figures and clothes. Fns are able to enjoy them by even wearing the same clothes and accessaries as animation character's.
That some animations are educational is another reason watching animations is good. Some of them are originally made for educational purpose such as to teach chinese characters, history, math or science. Learning with pictures and stories keeps in mind longer and helps learners understand. Even if other animations do not have the purpose in common animation watchers just can take advantage of animation to learn languages, especially foreign language. Learning foreign language using animation is better then usig other media pieces. Because voice from animations is clear and animations are full of conversations. Scripts of animations are more available and usual animation running time is quite short as around 20 minutes, so Learners can escape from tediousness by moving to another episode.
Educational effect of animation is not the end. It can provide with intellectual pleasure concerning with philosoghy and lessons. Some of animations tackle picky subjects such as racism, death and crime with a little help of fantasy and imagination. It also ignites consideration about virtues such as patience, tolerence and love. Although these subjects seem boring and difficult in school book animations come to us with little tediousness. Authors can put more imaginary situations ,so animations can make watchers consider these issuse in more if-senarios. Animations take us to a lesson in the end and conversations and arguemant between animation fans provide with much understand.
Some say watching animation does not help kids for future result and watching animation is no use to adults. But animations provide with fun , educational and intellectual pleasure. Thanks to many benefits of animation concerning with fun, educational and intellectual effects animation can make watcher think about difficult subjects with little hating. So watching animations is beneficial.
Yong-yoon Cho : You changed your second main idea. I think your new main idea is appropriate too. It would be better if you restate the controlling idea by adding concluding sentence in each body paragraph and improve your final thought.
ReplyDeleteChoi Jae Yoon: I think your topic is very interesting. it would be better if you add some examples to each supporting point. Also, making the concluding part a little bit longer would be a good way to improve your writing.
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ReplyDeleteA couple of years ago there was a telecom ad in which a baby is crying during a train travel while their parents embarrassed knowing not what to do. Suddenly a gentle man show an animation, pororo as proud as peacock then the baby quit crying and watch it pleasedly. Watching animations is fun and for parents, showing animations is convenient. Some may argue showing animation to children decrease valuable playing time between parents and children and watching animations is time wasting activity for not only babies but also young adults. However, watching animations is good because it is fun, educational and intellectual.
Above all, animations provide with fun. They have refined proceedings, distinct characters and amazing twists. they are no less impressive than written literatures. Animation watchers can have fun from not only animation stories and characters but also drawings. From wide view, they take use of various arts of drawings. There are own impressions and strength depending on drawing types of animations such as computer graphic, silhouette, clay and hand drawing. From narrow view point, animations generate pleasure by their fantastic scenes such as fighting scenes, beautiful scenes and others that is hard to produce in real filming. Animation fans can enjoy animations in other fields dealing with them such as games, movie versions, figures and clothes. Fans are able to enjoy them by even wearing the same clothes and accessaries as animation character's.
That some animations are educational is another reason watching animations is good. Some of them are originally made for educational purpose to teach such as chinese characters, history, math or science. Learning with pictures and stories helps learners understand the ideas and lessons, which keeps in mind longer. Even if other animations do not have educational purpose in common, animation watchers just can take advantage of animation to learn languages, especially foreign language. Learning foreign language using animation is better then using other media productions. Because voice from animations is clear, animations are full of conversations and scripts of animations are more available. usual animation running time is quite short as around 20 minutes, so learners can escape from tediousness by moving to another episode.
Educational effect of animation is not the only benefit of high- learning. It can provide with intellectual pleasure concerning with philosophy and lessons. Some of animations tackle picky subjects such as racism, death and crime with a little help of fantasy and imagination. It also ignites consideration about virtues such as patience, tolerance and love. Although these subjects seem boring and difficult in school book, animations come to us with little tediousness. Authors can put more imaginary situations, so animations can make watchers consider these issues in more if-scenarios, which is more fun and makes a variety of thought possible. Then animations take us to a lesson in the end and conversations and argument between animation fans facilitate much understand.
In short, some people say watching animation does not helpful for kids' future and watching animation is no use to adults. But animations are beneficial and can be more beneficial when used appropriately. Animations contain many educational and intellectual constituents. Thank to the fact that they are enjoyable makes the access to animation easier and more possible. Before judging animations are vain and of no use people should consider its benefits. And they should know they can use animations healthily and effectively if they find its novel usage and advantages.
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