All We Need Is Love
Are you in love now? Or are you being loved? When people hear these kind of questions, most of them think of their 'partners', such as their spouses, boyfriends and girlfiends. However, a dictionary definition of love includes a variety of emotions of affection and concern for anyone, and anything. That is the reason why people say they 'love' their jobs, schools, and pets of course. And love, if it refers to all kinds of care and consideration, has always been regarded as the foremost virtue for this society, and people who are living in this society. It is true that some are arguing about whether it is really necessary for human being. But still, that humans cannot live without love is an undeniable fact, and there are three primary reasons for that.
First, love can make people happy and enjoy thier lives. Except in the case of being stalked, no one in this world does not like to being loved. Love itself gives a great pleasure to people, since the feeling of being cared by someone is a precious emotion. Not just from being loved, but the pleasure of giving love can also be a pleasure. According to the Researchers of 'dailymail', which is the British media, discorverd that people who fall in love feel happiness, and also reduced negativity. It is because the function of prefrontal cortexof of people fell in love, which is the important part of the brain that is related with making decision, becomes less powerful. The area that deal with negativity and fear also becomes inactivated, reportedly. Furthermore, People who are truly in 'love' with their work and have so much passion for what they are doing, can still enjoy their working lives no matter how hard it is. Likewise, love is a passionate emotion that gives people happiness and helps them to keep the momentum going.
Another reason for human being need love is that love can be the solution for this society suffering from so much mental disorders. Today, there are lots of people who have mental illnesses and it it is rising as a serious issue of this 21st century. There can be hundereds of reasons why they became so, but one of the biggest causes is the lack of love. Children who were not loved enough by thier parents, which means they lacked attraction and care from their family, are more likely to have a problem with mental illnesses than the ordinary. Students who have a traumatic experience of bullied at school, can also be regarded as victims of the lack of love. In this case the problem was that they lacked attraction of their friends. And they all are being called 'outsider' and neglected today, even though they can be much better by givining just a little attention. Love for human, is therefore necessary, not just a good-to-have.
Finally, love can make us into being better people, and furthermore, make better lives. Love for their work makes people try harder in what they are doing and consequently, helps to improve themselves even more. Love for their pets teaches them how to care and empathize with that is non-human. Lastly, Love for somebody makes people mature, because they get to learn to be considerate of each other.
To wrap up, love is essential for human and we can never live without it for the pleasure from it, this society suffering from mental illnesses, and ourselves.
Compare to other parts, body part 3 and conclusion part both are apparently short. Maybe that's because you don't have final thought at the end.
ReplyDelete"According to the Researchers of 'dailymail', which is the British media, discovered that people who fall in love feel happiness, and also reduced negativity. It " - I think we don't need 'discovered that' ! :)
I liked everything about this essay, from the title itself to how it introduced love as having a positive effect on people. If I had to replace something, I would suggest removing a few sentences from the introductory paragraph and adding more ideas to the last body paragraph.
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ReplyDeleteYujin Kang / Final Draft / Wed 3,4
All You Need Is Love
Are you in love now? Or are you being loved? When people hear these kind of questions, most of them think of their 'partners', such as their spouses, boyfriends and girlfriends. However, a dictionary definition of love includes a variety of emotions of affection and concern for anyone and anything. It has always been regarded as the foremost virtue for people who are living in this society. It is true that some people are arguing about whether it is really necessary for human being. Nevertheless, that humans cannot live without love is an undeniable fact, and there are three primary reasons : for the pleasure from it, society suffering from mental illnesses, and ourselves.
First, love can make people happy and enjoy their lives. Except for the case of being stalked, no one in this world does not like to being loved. Love itself gives a great pleasure to people, since the feeling of being cared by someone and even caring someone is a precious emotion. According to the Researchers of 'dailymail', which is the British media, people who fall in love feel happiness, and also show reduced negativity. It is because the function of prefrontal cortex, which is the important part of the brain that is related with making decision, becomes less powerful. The area that deal with negativity and fear also becomes inactivated. Furthermore, people who are truly in love with their work and have so much passion for what they are doing, can still enjoy their working lives no matter how hard it is. Likewise, love is a passionate emotion that gives people happiness and helps them to keep the momentum going.
Another reason for human being need love is that it can be the solution for this society suffering from so much mental disorders. Today, there are lots of people who have mental illnesses and it is rising as a serious issue of this 21st century. There can be hundreds of reasons why they became so, but one of the biggest causes is the lack of love. Children who did not get enough love by their parents, which means they lacked attraction and care from their family, are more likely to have a problem with mental illnesses than the ordinary children. Students who have a traumatic experience of bullied at school can also be regarded as victims of the lack of love. In this case they lacked attraction of their friends. All of them are being called 'outsider' and neglected today, even though all they need is just a little attention. Love is not just a nice-to-have. Not only for the people themselves but also for the whole society, It is a must-have.
Finally, love can make people better, and furthermore, improve the quality of their lives. Love for their work makes them try harder in what they are doing. It can be the motivation for their lives, and helps them to become better selves. Love for their pets teaches them how to care and empathize with something that is non-human. People learn about the value of life and develop a sense of responsibility through their love for pets. Lastly and most importantly, love for someone makes people They get to know how to be considerate of and respect others. They learn to accept the other’s differences or flaws, and complement each other. Consequently It leads to their better lives.
There’s a saying, ‘Love is a game that two can play and both win.’ There’s no one losing this game. It always has been and always will be the greatest and also the most important virtue for human being. It is because It gives great pleasure to people, It can be the solution for this society suffering from so much mental disorders, and also It makes people and their quality of lives better. Love, is essential for everyone in this world, and people cannot live without it.