2016/04/09

YangSeunghyeok/writing proposal/Wed3,4

Topic: Watching animation

​Thesis statement: Watching animation is good

​Body paragragh 1


​Topic sentence: First, watching animation is good because of its story.


​Supporting points:


1. There are amazing twists in it.

2. A philosophical approach is available.


3. It can give you a lesson.


Body paragraph 2


Topic sentence: Another reason watching animation is good is you can appreciate its drawings.


Supporting points:


1. Some has fantastic scense.


2. You can use it to practice drawing.


Body paragraph 3


Topic sentence: Finally, it helps learning forien language.


Supporting points:


1. voice in animation is clear than movie's.


2. animation consist mostly of dialogue.


3. script of animation is more accessible than others'.


I will suggest examples of animations to help understand reasons why watching animation is good.

​양승혁 YangSeunghyeok 

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