Every student has their own stresses for their various reason.
Money can be the first reason. going to university is financially demanding for most students. university students have to pay tuition fee which reaches up hundred millions won. also students from distant regions need additional living expenses like rent.so those who can't get enough financial support from their parents have to do part-time job or get a student loan.
The second reason is that students have to get good grades to get a job after graduation. studying can be a huge burden when connected with getting a job. and these days, most universities are adopting relative evaluation. therefore students must compete with their peers. competing with close friends can be stressful.
Lastly, getting used to new circumstance is another reason of stresses of university students. when they first entered university, everything is new to them. Some people might like it but most students are nervous about adapting to new friends, new places, new atmosphere and so on.
These three causes are the main causes of university students' stress. We have to overcome stress to lead a happy college life. Stress can hinder enjoyable college life and desirable learning. So it is necessary to overcome stress to lead a happy college life.
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