2016/03/20

Shin Sungjoo/ Firsr Draft/ Wed. 3 4

Shin Sungjoo/ Firsr Draft/ Wed. 3 4


Some of students choose to live in dormitory when they start university. In fact, living in a dormitory benefits students from several ways. First of all, they can make many friends. Generally, dormitory could contain thousands people and it is esay to find someone who had similar hobbies. In addition, dormitory usually has lounge that provides sofas, TV and cooking area. It is a good place to meet new people and making friends while they having conversations. Another advantage for living a dormitory is that students can learn social skills. Normally, each student has one or two roommates in one dormitory room. They have to learn how to share everything with other people. It is the first step to adapt social life. Moreover, student should learn skills about how to take care of relationship with many friends. At last, students live in dormitory can save money. Some of students choose to rent a house. However, it needs cash deposit which is quite big money for student. For those dormitory liver does not need to pay cash deposit. Additionally, dormitory almost located close to the campus. Thus, students can save public transportation fees. To summarize, living in a dormitory not only can make many friends, but also can learn social skills. Meanwhile, they can save money as well.



2 comments:

  1. Chae Won Kim
    Add : it would be more clear if you add that 'dormitory life is beneficial' in last part again.
    Remove(or replace) : 'when they start university'(first sentence)

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  2. Shin Sungjoo
    Title: Why should university student living in the dormitory?

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