In March there helds meatings for introducing clubs and club fair in universities. There are a lot of reasons for students to join university clubs and organizations. First, students become club or organization members to develop thier capabilities of what they are already good at or interested in. For example, A student who are good at basketball joins a basketball sports club. A student who does not play the guitar well joins a club band in order to learn how to play it. Second, students join scholarly clubs or organizations in order to be advantageous when searching job. Students join economy clubs or clubs dealing with social issues to be knowlegeable for job interview in addition to that they are interested in that areas. Last of all, even though when they want to improve thier likings in clubs or want to join to prepare for thier future career, they can be unsure of being a member of clubs or organizations. Then Friends or chance to make friends can bring them to join clubs or organizations. Students enroll in clubs or organizations for such various reasons like drive to develop thier capabilities or to be ready for job application and reasons like anticipation to broaden or stengthen human relationships. 양승혁
Yong-yoon Cho : Hello! How about removing the first sentence? It would be great if you clarify the third supporting point by adding something like "they join clubs and organizations to get a chance to make new friends apart from anything else." in front of "even though when they want to improve...".
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ReplyDeleteGood writng, but I would like to add conclunding word such as - "To sum up" in front of concluding sentence.
How about remove 'Second' and replace it another transitional expression? And I think it is clear to move last sentence of third paragraph to first sentence of third paragraph
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