The Importance of Traveling
Traveling is an important part of our lives in various ways. First, it allows you to broaden your perspective in life. You get to meet people all over the world and experience their individual cultures in person. Understanding each and every culture can help break stereotypes you may have had before visiting the country. This eventually leads to opening up your view in general, helping you to become a more generous person. Also, becoming friends with various types of people while traveling is matter-of-fact. Whether it be in exotic restaurants or even places you stay in, you have tons of ways to meet new people and communicate with them. Even after you return home you can still stay in contact with your worldwide friends by becoming pen pals. Lastly, traveling can be therapeutic. A lot of people tend to visit other places just to relieve stress and simply relax. This makes you happier in life and very often enhances your self-confidence. To wrap up, traveling benefits you in that it helps broaden your perspective, allows you to meet worldwide friends, and is therapeutic.
Sue Min Hwang
ReplyDeleteEun Young! I like your topic and and your supporting points are very constructive. However 'Understanding each and every culture can help break stereotypes you may have had before visiting the country.' should go in front of the previous sentence as that sentence is supporting the first reason .