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Causes of stress among university students   Oh yeji   Topic : Causes of stress among university students Topic sentence : University students have a lot of stress, and there are reasons why they have stress Supporting points : Because of our invisible future Because we are not sure about our major Because of too high school fee   There are plenty of causes why university students get stress. First, stress is caused by our invisible future. When we were in the highschool, we always have our dream of a beautiful future, living as the person who is always called as a 'successful man'. But when we come to school. we know and feel that living life as an adult is not that easy. So students are afraid and worry about our future because it seems invisible.   Another common reason is because we are not sure about our major. When we go to the university, we choose our own major. And when before we enter the school we all have our own roman about their majors. But after entering the school and taking few classes, we get confused and have questions that whether our major is appropriate with us and our campus lives are not same as their imagination and our romans are broken. If their answer about our major is 'not appropriate with us', they have to find the measures of it and get stress, though their answer is 'appropriate', because not everything in major is about our imagination, we get stress again. And also, we get worries that whether we can do somethings such as earning money in the future with our major or not. This worries make students stress.   Finally, some students get stress by too high school fee. Unlike most of the highschools, universities' fee is very high-much higher than students expected. Universities school fee are mostly more than 3,000,000won and more than it. And because it is too expensive for be paid all of that by their parents, many of the students use loan and work hard to repay money. Also, they have to care about the interest and have to pay for it too.   To sum up, university students' stress is caused by a variety of reasons: because of our invisible future, because we are not sure about our major, because of high school fee.