Topic : Learning How to Write
Topic Sentence : University students have to learn how to write for several reasons.
Supporting Points
To see subjects objectively
To develop think power
To deliver opinions effectively
University students have to learn how to write academically for several reasons.
Firstly, writing helps to see subjects objectively. Unlike verbal messages, writing needs more analysis and researches for accuracy and appropriateness. In doing these, people can find pros and cons of the subject and get less distortion.
Next, thinking power can be developed by practicing writing. Through several rounds of elaboration, people have to change their page into more natural version. So, dozens of contemplation and reflection make people to think widely.
Lastly, students can learn to share their opinions effectively. Sometimes, calmness can be very effective to convince others more than toning up debate. A well-refined text could be very powerful than any others to touch someone's mind.
To sum up, knowing how to write is essential for university students. Because it gives them objective standpoint, helps to improve their thinking power and adds a way to exchange their ideas.
Hello Chaewon! I think this paragraph is more perfect if you add some introduction. Also how about replace word "change(in six line)" into "improve" or "reform"?
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ReplyDeleteHow about replacing 'for accuracy and appropriateness' of the second paragraph with 'for delivering accurate and appropriate meaning'? Also, it would be much better if you change 'Because it gives them ~' of the last paragraph to 'This is because it gives them ~'.
chae won kim
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Must Have : Proper Writing Skills