2016/03/20

Minyoung Jang/Page 20 Draft/Wed 3,4

Today, Almost 70% of students go to the university. Although the reasons for going to university are diverse from person to person, everyone who decide to attend wants and expects to get "something" from university. I think there are a couple of things that students need to get from university necessarily.

 

First, of course, students need to get academic knowledge about their major. That is what university intents and the purpose of the first. Students should study major and cultural subjects what they choose and want to learn. Another thing to need to get from university is good people. People often say "If you have one person who can talk without hesitation from university, your campus life is successful.". That means how hard to get "good" people. So students need to try to socialize with people and get your people. Finally, students need to get various experience in university. I think that joining the variety club, student organization is helpful to experience university life. And working part-time job and trip is also very meaningful experience.

 

To sum up, I think students need to get academic knowledge, good people, and various experience from university.

 

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  3. It'll be much more good writing if you remove 'I think' because everyone knows it's your writing. and replace the last sentence of your second paragraph, 'And working part-time job and trip is also very meaningful experience.' with another sentence that includes some experiences IN UNIVERSITY, such as 'Campus couple' or 'team play with seniors'. Having Part-time jobs and traveling is something that everybody can do without going to universities. Also, add some examples of students having various experiences in universities.

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    The "THINGS" that students must get from university.

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